Saturday, 5 November 2011

writing journal Nov 3

 I have many Ideas a bout the school sports program. Some of them are good some are not so great. The good things I have in mind were, the team had a lot of encouragement to keep each other going to keep their confidence up. When they scored or even when they missed. The bad things I thought were, for differently able people such as Jason McElwain, the coach and his team just thought he was really no use. In his first game they only let him out at the end to only get one basket and come back off. They thought because he was born with autism he was useless and they could let him get a basket so he could feel good about himself. Just because some one’s differently abled you shouldn’t be judge mental and think their garbage and leave it like that. You should always try to look at their implicit strengths and weaknesses and help them improve because everyone has the right to succeed

1 comment:

  1. Hey Justin,

    Really clear point of view here and well explained with some could evidence. I think you could have added a little more evidence from the video to talk about your main point. I also think you need to talk a little about how they under estimated him because he managed to score 20 points in the last 5 minutes of the game. Level 3 Mr. B

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