Sunday, 13 November 2011
Writing journal Nov 9 2011
Bark! Bark! Arf! Arf! Brrrrrrrrrrr. It's cold outside today, my humans haven't let me inside. This is always the start of each day. I'm hungry too. I can't wait till they feed me I can't wait to see what they add to my food today! Maybe it's gravy! Maybe it's broccoli! It could be anything! Rice, pasta sauce, chicken soup. Mmmm! I get hungry just thinking about it. Oh yeah! I haven't introduced myself! My name is Furgie. I am a Cairn Terrier. I live up to my species name. I can be fierce! I don't like big dogs so I bark at them to tell them to go away. I bark at big dogs to tell them to go away or that I "bite". I don't really bite them, but if a dog threatens me I am prepared to hold my ground. I also like to chase cats and squirrels, I love to do that. I'm sure my mom is glad I keep cats from pooping in our yard. I live up to that Terrier part of my species name. Yep, the dog terror! If cats poop in the yard behind my back I like to dig it up and eat it it tastes so good I cant help myself to eating it, well that's until I hear a tap on the window telling me to get out of there and come inside. I guess I can tell you more about myself but I guess that has to wait. I wonder what other dogs do all day but I know I have good owners.
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Hey Justin,
ReplyDeleteReally creative, nice sense of voice. I am thinking there maybe a little too much detail during some points. Remember the point is to only give your audience a hint of information. For example I might delete the below and include some of this detail in body paragraph. Level 3
I bark at big dogs to tell them to go away or that I "bite". I don't really bite them, but if a dog threatens me I am prepared to hold my ground. I also like to chase cats and squirrels, I love to do that. I'm sure my mom is glad I keep cats from pooping in our yard. I live up to that Terrier part of my species name.